My Haiku World

Posted in poetry | Tagged haiku, miscellaneous, musings, my life, poetry, psychedelics, random, reflections, thoughts, writing | 4 Comments

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1. on 2009/11/14 at 5:41 pm | Reply Existential Poet

   A very good add indeed! But, I wasn’t trying to “correct” you. Just… giving some details about where I was coming from. Your comments have been a “consciousness expansion” so far. What can I say, really? Just trying to keep writing and stay open to the energy. You understand, I know.

   
   
2. on 2009/11/14 at 11:47 am | Reply Yousei Hime

   Yes, now I understand. I missed the tags. I’ll have to look at them, after the first couple of reads. I too grew up in the 60′s and 70′s (born, in Houston, on the day Kennedy was assassinated). I will admit I am glad to have avoided the psychedelic scene but will not condemn anyone who participated. So, I am corrected, but keep to my comment with this add:

   Fred Astaire/Moody Blues good!

   
   
3. on 2009/11/14 at 10:41 am | Reply Existential Poet

   Ok, Yousei. It’s truth time, I think. My parents were ballroom dancers, and quite good! I remember as a small child… my sister and me going to their dance parties until very late. And, watching them and their friends all dancing. This was back in the late 1950s and early 60s.

   But… I am thinking you didn’t totally understand this haiku. It was for me, too. I grew up in the late 60s and 70s. Did you happen to look closely at the tags on this one? One of them is psychedelic.

   This haiku has multiple meanings. “Through a windowpane” means something else, too. Many years ago, I spent some time going down the rabbit hole, as it were, into the Wonderland, with Alice.

   So now you know, if you didn’t before…

   
   
4. on 2009/11/14 at 9:55 am | Reply Yousei Hime

   Wonderful. Fred Astaire good! This and your fresh tracks are the first to go into my flashdrive collection of “Favorite Stuff from Favorite Blogs”

   
   

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